[room for improvement]
One of the main criticisms that I have received for all my life probably is that I cannot make summaries:
with essays for school, poetry, selection of photos for different projects etc. I have this tendency of giving too much,
much too much.
I discovered that’s not only my problem, and this is reassuring somehow. Here is Bret who wrote a slightly long song
for a girl he likes but luckily enough he has a good friend (Jermaine) with succint-gansta-skills who is able to help him simplify things: